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skyy 2007-11-16 13:52

[聖母同人]空中花園~聖&志摩子

蠻喜歡志摩子這個角色~~~

可是~我發現她的內心戲很難呈現~~~

翻譯這篇怎麼翻都不順~~總覺得少了一點什麼~~~

功力不足~~還要多多鍛鍊啊~~~:lol :lol :lol



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[[i] 本帖最後由 skyy 於 2007-11-25 11:39 AM 編輯 [/i]]

zeushiuka 2007-11-16 14:19

多謝大大親自製作~~

rosa32222 2007-11-20 20:41

回復 #1 skyy 的帖子

好棒啊><翻譯的很好啊~

有深入人心><

看完了之後,總覺得有一種淡淡的愁在心裡蔓延......

cstu14 2008-4-9 18:38

這篇的深度很高呢  ...
我是這樣覺得  ...

5a72633 2008-4-10 08:47

聖母在上
i love it
想快些看到第4期@@

筱悅 2008-4-11 00:32

好深奧的文字表達哦 ...

真的,很深入人心。

ohno520 2008-5-5 02:52

不錯呢
謝謝分享

bugg 2008-6-2 04:08

淡淡的愛
持續在心中發酵:D

玄晴森 2008-9-26 23:35

[table=100%,#FFFFE6][tr][td][size=9pt][發帖際遇]: [url=http://ds-hk.net/event.php]玄晴森看到路邊的乞丐, 施捨了現金36Ds幣給乞丐.
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感謝大大的分享
也要大聲說..
志摩子 加油~

nckwin 2008-9-27 01:50

利害
喜歡聖和久保琹
志摩子也喜歡

way510571 2008-10-27 21:01

[table=100%,#FFFFE6][tr][td][size=9pt][發帖際遇]: [url=http://ds-hk.net/event.php]way510571玩寵物的時候不幸損失現金3Ds幣.
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深度....

太高深了...

wan0032001 2008-10-31 00:20

[table=100%,#FFFFE6][tr][td][size=9pt][發帖際遇]: [url=http://ds-hk.net/event.php]wan0032001玩小豬樂園, 獲得現金3Ds幣.
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淡淡的愛
心卻有點淡淡的憂傷化不開

alanback 2009-5-11 04:58

好玄妙的故事,不錯呢!

nanaricky 2009-5-15 10:53

很多同人都沒有作者名字

裡面的花到底是誰畫的?
看的出來嗎?

Eallyiu 2009-5-21 03:52

都多謝你既分享!!

叛逆ㄚ宣 2009-8-4 05:29

謝謝樓主分享~~~!!!

gugugan781115 2009-8-26 07:48

喜歡

這一篇真好   希望可以又下部

spadep00632 2010-4-30 19:41

聖母的愛都很美~:107: :107:

白狼騰 2010-7-30 15:59

多謝分享~
果然深澳呢!!

jingle18 2010-8-14 15:40

聖跟志摩子之間有時我真不了解這兩姐妹~~
不過這篇真的很像這兩人的風格呢~~:)
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