[現代都市] 《愛人．被愛》作者：夜瞳【完結】

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1^# 大中小發表於 2009-12-1 22:37 顯示全部帖子

very good

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this story is about two person how to become lover from friend. i kind of love this kind of story, just don't have much story line.
oh... keep on friend... like to see more in your work.

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limfun

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2^# 大中小發表於 2009-12-2 00:05 顯示全部帖子

a bit boring

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till the end is getting dull, just make me don't have the moon to read it anymore. after skip ready this page i finally finshed already.

readlly sad to said it.
Mesti usaha lagi! harap boleh tengok awak punya kerja bagus lagi.

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